Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, August 27, 2021
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Great story Jacob! I really enjoyed it. Your picture is great too. What made you come up with this idea? Well done with your punctuation. It really makes your story easy to read. Keep up the creative writing.
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Hi Jacob. Did you write this story? I really enjoyed reading it. You have done a great job drawing an illustration of the character. Don't forget to add an explanation with your blog posts so that it is clear what the activity is or where the idea came from. Mrs B
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